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"I am a new writer". Just starting out and I am in school for writing for children . I am 35 years old and my children keep me going .There is not a day you would not see me sitting at my desk writing some thing sipping on coffee.

Story: Little Wing

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made a few spelling muddles was trying to talk with my son at the same time I hope you enjoy the read

Lisa Rose

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It was very hard to read your story. When you write dialogue, you should begin a new paragraph when the speaker changes. It makes it easier for the reader to keep track of who is speaking and the ending punctuation should go in the quotation marks. You definitely need someone to help you proof read your story or try reading it out loud to yourself this will help you catch mistakes. In the first three sentences you wrote 'now were' when it should have been 'no where' also 'sent' when it should have been 'scent'. If you have the time, please read my story, 'Drift Away' and write a review, letting me know if you liked it.

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