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Bonifacious Atiase graduated from the Ghana Institute of Journalism in 2003 and has since written countless number of articles that were published in newspapers and magazines. With regards to the electronic media, on the other hand, he also wrote and featured inspiring articles on REFLECTION (Ghana Television) as well as THOUGHT FOR THE DAY (Radio Ghana). He moved a step further from the sphere of the media into the world of creativity and has successfully authored works of fiction and non-fiction.

Story: A DREAM COME TRUE

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Alyce Wilson

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I've read the other comments and, after reading through your story, my advice would be to sit down and ask yourself what is really important to this story? You can ask that about every paragraph: does this move the story along? Many of the details in the beginning are ultimately unimportant. I think you have the seeds of a great story here, if you can cut out the extraneous part and do more "showing" rather than "telling." Good effort! Please take a moment to read my story, "Dating Safari," and share your comments.

Lisa Rose

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Show don't tell. Your characters should show the story through dialogue, instead of you telling it to us. Also the shift in time is confusing, you need to work on your story structure. If you have the time, please read my story, 'Drift Away' and leave a review, letting me know if you liked it.

NikiC

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I liked it, keep the good work!

Not Tony

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Great passion but too much explaining. Let characters talk.

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