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Novelist from the smallest of towns, in the biggest of countries. Please read my work and help make me as big as I want to be!

Story: Flies.

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Alyce Wilson

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This is very heartfelt, and it captures the sense of a teenage speaker. However, I'm having trouble buying the fact that he's actually schizophrenic; there needs to be more "showing" rather than just telling. Having lived with someone who suffered from that condition, I know that it's a regular part of life and would be very hard for him to hide, even from a father distracted by grieving. Still, I commend you for taking on such important subjects. Please take a moment and read my story, "Dating Safari," and share your comments.

Lisa Rose

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Interesting. I think the story would have benefited from more dialogue. Please write a review of my story, 'Drift Away' and let me know what you think.

mcharles5

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Great read! Thank you!

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