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I am a poet preparing my first publication. Raised 3 beautiful daughters I turned myself around a few years ago to achieve new goals. Now I inspire young people from around the world to face their own challenges, with confidence and self esteem.

Story: LOST AND FOUND

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Joevimalraj

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A wonderful story filled with thoughts, the tension growing in the girl, the anticipation, the expectations and the moment she hugged her dad... gone all the agony.. The love, the re-union after many years.. the kids.. his grandchildren.. the story of a solider.. the understanding..the long drive... and a twist of his grandson going missing and the knowledge of the solider in tracing him again.. the sense of humor to make the kid forget his pain.. the celebration.. Wow.. this is a fantastic short story... Fun of anticipation on what happens next.. A real masterpiece.. Best wishes THE NEXT AUTHOR OF AMERICA.. :-)

Busyfingers

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This is a moving story. You evoke emotions well, and the characters seemed interesting. You do need to work on your tenses, though, as there is no harmony. Also this sentence: "He felt her shivering from the cold, and wrapped his warm jacket around her, as he sped down the road "? Needs to be rearranged. If you look at it closely, you'll realize it's close to impossible for Tamer to do this the way it was written. Also, no word of her entering the car. "She lay there thinking that she was already feeling safe in the love of a man who adored her. She needed no other major calamity in her life right now." This makes it sound like feeling safe in the love of a man who adored her was the first calamity. There were also some spelling errors and typos which a bit more editing will take care of. Good work.

Lisa Rose

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A really good story. I can't imagine the pain of never knowing where you came from or why your parents gave you away. I loved the idea of the grandfather rescuing his grandson after he searched so long to find his own daughter. If you have the time please read my story 'Drift Away' and leave a review to let me know if you liked it.

Abey Zenith

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A wonderful story! i can almost imagine the images of the story in my head when i start reading this! will look forward for more! thumbs up!

Austin

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Super Story! I love it :D

Shona

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Well done, beautifully written. I love it.. I can wait to read your first book.

crispy

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A nicely framed account narrated in a gentle, yet compelling manner. I too noticed some oddities of phrasing and such early on but nothing of the scope another poster suggested. In fact, seeing as the narrator could quite easily be perceived as the adopted child protagonist, it's easy to overlook. I mean, imagine writing anything so emotionally involved and maintaining perfect diction at the same time as those nascent memories come happily flooding in. (Btw, I'm not suggesting the author is the protagonist [aka: George's daughter] rather that Rose's characterisation seems to go from hesitant to self-assured as the tale unfolds in much the same way IMO as the author herself...A nice parallel and eloquent documenting of a family mystery come full circle...:D

Promise

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If this is the author's first time attempt, I have to say it's A WINNER.. You can just imagine the type of material which this author is capable of, given the chance at what she has. TALENT. Wishing the author all the best on her FIRST ever attempt which touched me very much in what in fact has a lot to do with real life occurences.. A story well worth reading..

Lia

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Great writing. Thoroughly enjoyed the read. Beautiful story. Loved the interlude between the grandfather and grandson and the owl. The words in this story paint a picture. Thank you and well done.

Nica

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Love the story from the beginning till the end. I'm looking forward to read more stories in the future...

Lande

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This short & sweet story is just emotionally beautiful, What a blessing of that father reuniting with his child, Definitely is a n# 1 & a winner, The unite of the father & child makes the story captivating & amazing, Love Love Love , Definitely a MASTERPIECE

Tamer Nik

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" Thy creation has endeavored at its best gracious feel, from thine prospective theme of love....good work mother!!

Book lover

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Let me just say, the first page of this story doesn't fit with the rest of it...it is almost as though two different people wrote it. The first page is full of editing errors. There are missing words and words that are used wrong or just shouldn't have been used... And then you move past that page and the book begins to flow and it takes on a life of it's own. When the son is discovered to be missing, you feel the mothers terror. The end is predictable but that didn't take anything away from it. I really enjoyed this story!

Sammie

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Great short story. I think you have a talent for creative writing which you should continue to explore. Would like to see more of your work as you develop as a writer. Keep it up.

moana

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this is an amazing story....I understand there are many cases like this happening in our lives...I would recommend this story for everyone to read and experience true things happening which touch many hearts. trully a masterpiece!!

Queeniesmurfie

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If you continue to write like this, I could fill my bookcases with all your Novels..Series (preferably:))..So beautifully touching..So moving...so close to the heart. It brought tears to my eyes. I love the fact that your story is the kind that so many from all walks of life can relate to. I feel this is one of the reasons it touched my heart. Thank you so much...You truly have a special Gift. Please keep writing and keep on sharing. God bless you in this beautiful Journey and may it be a Journey that will touch many lives throughout the world. Kia Kaha Mamasmurf. Love you♥♥♥

Tina C

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I was hooked from the first sentence. Thoroughly enjoyed this short story. A beautiful relationship between the characters came through and I felt like I was Rose meeting my Dad for the first time. This is a winner:) Thank you for sharing this story, I want to read more from this Author:)

Savea

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I was moved to tears as this story reminded me of my own journey in life without my dad in my life. It's also truly a masterpiece for Katesa. Very clear and straight to the heart. THIS IS A WINNER!!!

Jim

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A very inspiring family drama. But all the drama is in the head or the heart. The fear of not knowing and the joy of discovering someone knew are parts of this exciting story. Well done and all the best.

Meto

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What a story Katesa really touch my heart..just remind me of the story of my dad who was adopted and one day running away to find his dad..just so easy to read and understand every paragraphs of the story..well done hope you will be a TOP WINNER..the TOOHILL definitely all vote for you...GO KATESA GO KATESA!!

Wilhelm

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Very well done ! I like it. Easy to read and understand..I can feel every deep feelings that goes with it, especially the first meeting..the reality is, it is a real event in some of our struggling lives. It happens to some of us, and such times we are not very forgiving. The lesson is learned, instead of being bitter about it, a loving way is shown of how to love and forgive...my heart is touched with this story.

Katharina

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What a story of emotional sea-saw rides finding a climax in deep understanding and awareness. Indeed life in the NOW is blissful. Katesa your story has captivated me. Thank you.

Elfreda

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I read it and I loved it! I really like how you managed to get right to the point of the whole story. Really intriguing about her being adopted and then finding her real father and uniting with him. Very symbolic how the grandfather was the one to save the little boy - in a manner of speaking it was like "saving" his own child and giving back to her what she lost so many years ago by making sure that she does not suffer another devastating loss. Very well done, Tess!

Sandy

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This is indeed a Masterpiece. Beautifully written. It is a touching story of a woman reuniting with her birth father after so many years. The author teaches that love and forgiveness are key in any family relationship. I love how the story connected after each paragraph. I would recommend this story to all ages. Easy to read and comprehend. She deserves to win!

Iva

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I was drawn into the story right from the beginning and found myself being nervous while she waited to greet her father for the first time. I came away from the computer feeling closure. Awesome story writing. A WINNER!!!

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