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I am a classical writer who was born and raised in L.A. Who enjoys bringing charactors to life through fiction and non-fiction , very bealievable stories. I am also a Mother that life has brought love and so many treasures from my beautiful family. I am thankful for any oppritunity to share my art with others.

Story: Cynical Hysteria

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shytime

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i read your storyit was very good need some correction but very good plot please keep writting

Volcano Sunset

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A good story, but a little hard to follow. The story is rife with emotional inputs that seem to present the plot as rather chaotic. I think if you rework the story and add definition to the characters,it will make a great story. Keep writing!

Cutie desi

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It was different and very interested story it was great I liked it very good.

Busyfingers

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It's a great story line and the plot is pretty deep. However, it would benefit from a whole lot of editing for punctuation and grammar. It's easy to get confused as to who's doing the talking. It also needs more descriptions of place and time and the characters; description would also serve as a good transition from one scene to the next. Keep writing!

Lisa Rose

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I'm sorry, but your story is very hard to read. There are multiple mistakes in it. For example you wrote: 'Mom could not have been more proud than a peacock displaying a rainbow of colors on hot day mom only respond was remaining dad of how he rejected me.' This is a run-on sentence and should be separated into several. You need to proof read over and over and over; then have someone else read it for you and let them check for errors. The above sentence might have been better like this: 'Mom couldn't have been prouder. She was like a peacock displaying a rainbow of colors on a sultry summer day, but her beautiful memory was tainted by how Dad rejected me. Keep writing, practice makes perfect! If you have the time please read my story 'Drift Away' and leave a review to let me know if you liked it.

Super star

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This was a damn good book

was great

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it was lovly and i would buy it any day!

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