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Sidney is a Master's student at Loughborough University in Creative writing. He may be studying in England, but he is from Illinois, USA. He has seven younger siblings and a very supportive family. His life's desire is to become a well known author.

Story: Mommy and Daddy

Reviews

Lisa Rose

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Your story started slow with all the descriptions but once you hit your stride it was really good. Terrifying imagery; the orderly house the bloody basement. Trying varying your word usage (Mommy, Daddy to Mother Father He She) it will help the reader get more involved. If you have the time please read my story 'Drift Away' and leave a review to let me know if you liked it.

TheGarbageMan

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This story should have been thrown in the trash.

Isailovic

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I loved it!

Aunt Dee Dee

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I love reading anything you write!

Frances Bell

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The whole first half of the story was set-up, discription of the family - way too much. A huge edit would make it far more effective and efficient. The second half flowed better, as if two different writers had written the halves or finally, the writer was enjoying his craft. I am surprised, knowing you're studying an MA in the UK... my rate is awarded for the originality of your idea which fits the Horror genre.

Francis Smith

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The idea here is GREAT, a nice twist on the all American Mom and Dad. It's just let down by a rushed, slap-dash execution. Break it up into paragraphs, that wall of words is hard to get over. But, I loved it all the same.

gram

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I know it is supposed to be a horror story and it lives up to it's name. GREAT HORROR!!!

CeremonyWithinWQI

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Needs major revision. Plot does not flow well. Mommy, Daddy repetition becomes trite. Subject matter is common.

PennilessWriter

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I saw all the great reviews and five-star ratings, and I got really excited because I LOVE a well-crafted horror story. This, however, was not a well-crafted horror story. The constructions is extremely tedious, with long successions of sentences beginning with the same word "They... They... They...", "Mommy... Mommy... Mommy...", "Daddy... Daddy... Daddy..." Reading it was like driving in stop-and-go traffic. The twist is indeed horrifying, but the story overall is a lot like the movie "Parents," but that film worked because it balanced the meticulous order and horror with dark humor. I wanted to like this story, but it has problems with structure, flow, and content that I just find insurmountable.

Stever

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Great story Sidney!! Keep up the great work!!

Kris

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Whoa, that took quite a turn. Kept me reading, though. Awesome story, man.

LIZ!!!

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I have read this a few times and I love it!

Sarah Dospod

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Awesome Sidney! Keep up the great writing :)

Jackie R.

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Wow, Sidney. Great story. Darth Vader would like your "dark side".

Pete Bubb

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I was totally suprised at the ending. Way to go Sidney !!

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Awesome Sidney!

DMC

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Great Read!

♡Elementals #1 Fan

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Great read! What an imagination. Can't wait to see this author's work in the stores!!! Great job Sidney!

Kirsty

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Knew it was going somewhere creepy, but couldn't quite work out where. Loved it.

Uncle Scottie

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Awesome story, i will pass this on to my friends for sure!!!!!

Godmom!

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This Book is HIGHLY recommended!!! A Must read!!! An excellant read!!!

Tashi

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Very detailed and very gruesome. It was a very good read, especially near the end. I don't normally read this genre, but I must admit, it had me enthralled and wondering, "Where in the world is this leading to?" And then I knew....and it was very, very horrifying.

Sam Dospod

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Very creepy and twisted, the ending actually gave me chills. Great work Sidney.

Collin Shackleton

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Loved it! so worth reading. Great work.

Jen K

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Very good read! I kept picturing the Cleavers from Leave It to Beaver, only with a very dark and twisted secret. Fantastic!

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