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Whitney Tolliver

I'm an eighteen year old senior who loves to write. I live in Buena Vista, Colorado and I have two sisters and one brother, all younger than I am. My mother and father are very supportive of my writing and so is my mentor and friend Alison. I enjoy reading as much as writing and also outdoor activities and animals.

Story: Believe in Fragments

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kykylynn

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wow .. Whitney this is great i am so proud... your cousin kylla

she is the best

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it's a nice story..

geebee

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well written, with great emotion. your story kept my attention!

shorty321

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Good short read. I think this young author has great potential.

Busyfingers

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A poignant piece. The emotions shone through. I liked the two POVs in the story, as well as the line, "I felt like the blind man whom Jesus gave back his sight." There were a few missing words, however, and just to to say that whenever there's a new person speaking, there should be a new paragragh.

ReaaddinnnBug101

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It was a great story. It deserves first place for sure.

James R.

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In all honesty, I didn't think this piece was that well written. However, the potential for a masterpiece is there and the story bursts with emotion. I truly felt pain and fear, love and loss. Despite my reluctance, I'd say this is a short story that deserves at least second place.

Charly44

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I think this is a good story, but it has a few grammatical errors. Still, I loved it.

Ashleyrocks11232

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LOVE IT! Oh my God, I totally thought that this form of writing was extinct! GOOD JOB! :D

Elizabeth2233

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I think that this is a well written work of art, that, although strange, is touching and bittersweet. It portrays the pain of love and betrayal, and most of all, of moving on.

alx420

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wonderful story of the confusion and wonder of heartache and the bliss from where it came.

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