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Story: The gift of MUSIC


Lisa Rose

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I like the message of your story, that the fast way isn't always the best way. I did however notice that you tend to forget the punctuation at the end of your quotation marks. ("Yes, this might be my chance of making it in the music industry" she said.) There should be a comma after industry. Also when someone new begins speaking you should start another paragraph. This helps the reader differentiate between characters. I hope that you will read my story, Drift Away and let me know what you think. Thanks.

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